Okay, I am in day two of this poetry class and our assignment is to write a limerick containing a journey and alliteration. Limericks are known to be humorous and writing humor is quite a challenge for me. And composing one limerick with a journey and alliteration was a bit much so I wrote two separate limericks to accomplish this assignment. One focuses on a journey I once embarked on while the other limerick as an attempt at a more humorous alliteration. Do you think I completed the assignment correctly? I will say, I had fun creating these two short poems and I hope you enjoy them.
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Surprising Journey
One day I began a journey
When it was cold and blustery
In the sky I gazed
And was quite amazed
To see a sundog watching me
Bessie Boo
Bessie Boo bought ballerina shoes
Dyed in black and blinding blue
She met a bashful knight
Who could not dance just right
And banged her toes all black and blue
Simply awesome!
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I thought they were great. I don’t know if I can do that well. I will try.
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That’s brilliant, I wish I’d thought of it!
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Nice work with the alliteration. Well done π
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“Banged her toes all black and blue” … Funny. I loved it π
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Thank you!
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